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My newsvine writing assignment for the month was on Freedom, and as it were I was not supposed to edit as I go, but part of me can't help it...at any rate this is what I wrote. Freedom: As I start the car and drive away from the babysitter’s house I am free, for a couple of hours before I have to go to sleep and get ready for the next day of work. I wish I could have more time, but alas I do no…